I just posted the third chapter of my story online and has introduced a subplot and also changed the POV to the second main character. I have a few questions.
1. How did you find the introduction of the POV characters? He appears in the previous chapters but we know little about him. So how did you find his official introduction?
2. What did you think about Lucian?
3. What did you think about Damian?
4. What did you think about L & D's relationship as brothers?
5. Was it clear that I introduced a subplot?
6. How did you find the chapter overall? Do you think it's a stronger chapter then the previous two?
7. Would you continue reading the story online or would you buy it if it ever gets published?
Here's the link to chapter 3: memory lane:
http://www.booksie.com/young_adult/novel/jj_gress/fallen:-the-awakening-vol-1-initiation/chapter/3
1. How did you find the introduction of the POV characters? He appears in the previous chapters but we know little about him. So how did you find his official introduction?
2. What did you think about Lucian?
3. What did you think about Damian?
4. What did you think about L & D's relationship as brothers?
5. Was it clear that I introduced a subplot?
6. How did you find the chapter overall? Do you think it's a stronger chapter then the previous two?
7. Would you continue reading the story online or would you buy it if it ever gets published?
Here's the link to chapter 3: memory lane:
http://www.booksie.com/young_adult/novel/jj_gress/fallen:-the-awakening-vol-1-initiation/chapter/3