Secretarys day promo?
Actually, she's not "good to go", Gaspen...although you did point out some good edits, there's a bit more to add. Here's the letter after I proofed it some:
This Professional Assistant's Day, rejuvenate your staff with a massage gift certificate from Hands-On Health.
Why is this the perfect gift for your staff?
Research shows that massage therapy has many positive benefits, including:
Promotes relaxation
Reduces muscle tension
Reduces absences from work due to sick time by decreasing stress
Gives them a sense of overall wellbeing
Decrease stress and promote relaxation with a 30-minute massage from Hands-On Health at a specially reduced price of just $15.00 (regular price is $25.00). Buy 3 or more gift certificates and receive one for yourself FREE!
Make this the best Professional Assistant's Day ever!
Just a couple words of caution - whenever sending out promotional letters/flyers/etc., try not to abbreviate any wording and try not to be too wordy in the message you want to get across to the reader.
Be well,
Jen